Archives for the month of: November, 2013

Our brave little band met on November 21, 2013 to discuss KV’s 1952 dystopian novel “Player Piano”. The discussion was admirably led by John Sturman. Others participating were: Jeff Bates, Chris LaFave, Lorraine Price, Celia Latz, Karen Lystra, Janet Penwell, Jay Carr, Phil Watts, Dave Young and Bill Briscoe. We joined for the first time with Jody Flynn and we look forward to seeing her again.

Bill gave us a well-balanced schedule of monthly readings for 2014. From the KV canon, we will read four novels, two short story collections, a collection of speeches and a play. We will also read a biography (by Gregory Sumner), a comparative study of KV and Hemingway, and two issues of the “Literary Journal of the Kurt Vonnegut Memorial Library. In November we will read something from our yet to be selected guest author who will come for Vonnegut Fest. The schedule will be published here when it is finalized. The Carmel Public Library, 55 4th Avenue SE, Carmel, In (across from Carmel High School on 131st Street) will host a book discussion (Critical Mass) of next month’s selection “Slaughterhouse Five” from 7PM to 8:30PM on Wednesday, December 4, 2013.

“Player Piano” takes place in an industrial mid-western city sometime after a nuclear war has forced factories to automate, thus displacing laborers. The educated managerial class lives on one side of the river and the working class lives on the other side carrying out make-work government jobs in a society where their work lacks dignity. The protagonist, Paul Proteus, is a rising young engineer who bonds with the laborers and starts a revolution. Comic relief is provided by the Shah, a middle-eastern potentate on a State Department tour of the United States. The Shah is naive, but his observations about class cuts through the noise society has generated.

John got us started by remarking that this dystopia written 60 years ago was remarkably prescient. The laboring class has lost its skills; we have a permanent military class; and automation has led to disequilibrium. (He would refer to a neurological syndrome, wouldn’t he?). John was impressed by an essay by James Fallows that appeared in the New York Review of Books issue of 9/27/84: “A Parable of Automation”. He noted that KV was not an anti-tech Luddite, but wanted technology to be used in a way that would benefit rather than harm society. We have a two-tiered economy with a vanishing middle class and almost half of our citizens (including your scribe) are more or less dependent on government payouts. We have so far avoided nuclear war, but things are going to get worse before they get better.

Chris chipped in with his observation that this is the only KV novel that might have been a collaboration with George Orwell. He was delighted with the combination of futurism and sharp social satire. We then launched into a discussion about automation and the state of the workforce. Bill used his 40 years of experience as a manufacturing engineer to explain the economics from a management point of view. Competitive pressures force societies to change. Vonnegut pessimistically forewarned us of what was coming.

Chris remarked that KV was concerned with making the change morally. John recalled that it was difficult for society to pressure industry citing the recent dust-up the City of Indianapolis had with Sentient Technologies. For a number of years Sentient had racked up loads of safety and environmental violations. In 2013, when the City tried to bring them into compliance, they responded by moving their corporate headquarters to Chicago. To (someone) the book was about work losing its dignity. Paul, the would-be farmer, purchases a low-tech farm with the romantic idea of returning to the land. However, he has no intention of actually farming. KV is really making a sly attack on liberal concepts – full of good intentions but lacking in reality. Chris echoed that KV was attacking moral relativism. He found the ending to be depressing but enjoyed the book nevertheless. You have to be very optimistic to hope that anything positive will come from Paul’s failed revolution. Janet did see an opportunity for a new beginning and John pointed out that the working class was anxious to go back to actually making something with their hands. Jeff reminded us that our education system was not preparing our citizens for work and that we had to bring in thousands of skilled immigrant workers on H1 visas to fill the gap. We then digressed to talk about the ills in our schools and the need for stability and discipline to make it to what is left of the middle class. Jody felt that life has lost a lot of meaning and that we fail to recognize the many ways that genius manifests itself. There is no room for creativity (actually her words were more profound than this summary – your scribe forgot his reading glasses and had trouble with the notes).

Phil found that the one person in the novel who really cared was Paul and he was taken by the bar scene on page 102 where KV demonstrates Paul’s love for the common people.

Paul’s Stepfordian wife, Anita, provoked some discussion. Cold-hearted Anita had one goal in life and that was to propel Paul up the corporate food chain. When Paul rebelled she left him for another rising executive. Karen, well versed in Barbara Ehrenreich’s 1983 tome “The Hearts of Men: American Dreams and the Flight from Commitment” gave us a reprise of one chapter, “The Gray Flannel Dissidents,” which critiques levels of conformity in men from the Mad Men era to the Playboy era and beyond. The fifties lead to the sixties and liberated men began to see that marriage is slavery. KV did an excellent job connecting to all of this. It is all too complicated for this small space, but if you want to learn more, go to the external essays page on this blog and you will find a student book review that outlines Ehrenreich’s thesis. Whether you find Ms. Ehrenreich insightful or polemical, you can’t deny her powers of observation.

Bill treated us to another of his intensely rhyming poems “Automation Machination”. Unfortunately, he had a computer breakdown and could not copy to our blog so this opus may be lost to posterity.

Phil, the scorekeeper we entrust with the 10 point KV scale, reports that the group gave “Player Piano” an 8.0 rating despite the negative input of an old curmudgeon who found the novel to be hopelessly depressing outdated satire. Our next meeting will be on December 19th, 2013 when we will take on “Slaughterhouse Five”. Karen Lystra will lead the discussion and she would like to hear from prospective attendees topics they would like to explore. You may email her at: klystra@fullerton.edu For more reading on this, you may enjoy Matthew Gannon’s essay “Player Piano; The One-Dimensional Society and the Emergency Brake of History” at: vonnegutreview.com.

Dave Young

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Meeting, October 24, 2013

“The Things They Carried” by Tim O’Brien

Note: Our esteemed recorder, Dave Young was not in attendance. Therefore, the format of the notes will not be in his usual, eloquent, literary style. Attending today were Jay Carr, leader; Bill Briscoe, Chris LaFave, Chuck Carroll, Matt Hollander, Jeff Bates, Julia Whitehead, (her son, Daniel, who is on school break), Bob Marks, Phil Watts, Janet Hodgkin, Janet Penwell, and Diane Richards.Before the discussion of the book The Things They Carried, Julia reminded the members of coming events/activities for Vonnegutfest 2013, in Indianapolis, Saturday, November 9, 2013. (For the entire list of activities go to vonnegutlibrary.org. ) Author Tim O’Brien, who wrote “The Things They Carried,” will be in attendance and will be available to sign his book.

Jay Carr, the leader of today’s review, passed to each member tiny toy soldiers with numbers on the bottom. The numbers corresponded to a list of chapters and characters from the book. As we discussed each of these, the person with that number was to have the final word on the subject. However, as with other best-laid plans, once the discussion began, there was no stopping the direction in which minds and conversations roamed. Therefore, since this became a rapid-fire barrage at times, please, forgive this recorder for not always indicating which statements were made by whom.

Jay began the discussion with the question, “Which chapter left you with the worst impression?”Janet P. felt the images created in the killing of the VC baby water buffalo by Rat in “How to Tell a True War Story” brought her to tears. The discussion continued with various thoughts about how Rat could have done such a cruel thing. Jeff believed Rat had to be a sociopath even before Viet Nam to have committed such cruelty. Others added that the horrors of the war probably contributed to his out-rage and his need to destroy something /anything through cruelty, and this need was enhanced by the guilt Rat felt over the death of Curt Lemon.

Jay asked what each of us carries. Bill responded he had added up the “things” he carries and then moved on to the emotional baggage everyone carries. This led to his most recent poem. [The poem follows this article. Bill’s format would not display due to wordpress limitations – DEY]. Bob continued with the over-lapping of the emotional and physical baggage by telling a story about his son. Bob traveled often when his son was young, and one time, the boy came running in before Bob had finished packing and insisted his dad carry a plastic dog in the suitcase. Bob always after that carried what the family called “Travel Dog”. Jay also mentioned that many people carry lucky charms. Bob continued by asking how many thought of the “Mash” TV series as they read the book. Matt, the youngest member of our group today, responded he had never seen an episode. As a group we recommended he rent the movie as an introduction.

Matt continued by saying that to him the most important chapter of the book was “How to Write a War Story” due to the explanation by the writer that parts of all of the stories could be fiction or could be truth. The writer makes the decision what to write and how much of what he writes is true. Others added maybe O’Brien believed the reader would not condemn the actions of the characters as much if they did not believe the story was true. O’Brien calls himself a coward for going to Viet Nam. He related the story of how he tormented himself over and over because he did not want to go, and how many times he considered going to Canada. He said he was a coward because he could not take the embarrassment and the looks and feelings of his family and his hometown if he did not go. Bob said he does not remember agonizing over the decision. He just did not want to go. He received a medical deferment and continued to get drunk and find girls because at that stage of his life (23) he believes he was bankrupt of values. Americans did not want the war. Phil mentioned the senseless patrols the men made in total darkness. Bob added a friend who was there said they could have ended the whole thing in 30 days, but it drug on and on. Janet P. added in Westmoreland’s book he was haunted by the uselessness of this war, but no one seemed impressed at the time. As Diane suggested, Americans seemed to have no great feeling about whether the war was right or wrong. It was all wrapped up in politics. Bill added colonialism was ending. Communism was spreading. Maybe the war did help stop the spread. But, as Julia said, communism fails on its own.

Jay next referred to the chapter called “Love”. In the book, Jimmy has a girl back home. He thinks of her constantly even though he knows she doesn’t love him as he loves her. Is that a coping mechanism? Most agreed it is and could think of other such stories. Most felt sorry for Jimmy when, in desperation, he burned the letters and pictures in his fox hole one night. As Bill said, however, war relationships even worked the other way. His mother-in-law became friends with the family of the man who became his father-in-law when he returned from WWII.

The story of the death of nine-year-old Linda was brought up. Was it true? Was it fiction? It seemed such trauma would have affected O’Brien’s entire life. Most agreed as readers, we were all sucked into the stories and believed even though we could not determine how true they were.

Jay asked how each member rated the book, and the average was 8.6 out of 10. The book for November 21st discussion is Vonnegut’s “Player Piano”.

Janet Hodgkin

The Emotional Baggage They Carried

The coping emotions they carried:
Faith
Hope
Memories
Stories
Feelings
Love
Longing
Loneliness
Awe
Good humor Responsibility
Illusion of safety

Egotistical matters they carried:
Pride
Poise
Dignity
Reputation
Envy
Macho zeal

The suffering they carried:
Blame
Guilt
Hate
Hurt
Sadness
Anger
Pain
Panic
Humiliation
Resignation
Fright
Mortification
Burden of being alive

The blah they carried
Dullness of desire
Dullness of intellect
Dullness of conscience
Dullness of hope

Dullness of human sensibility

The mind games they carried:
Imagination
Thoughts
Memories
Daydreams
Fantasies
Mysteries
Unknowns
Jealousy
Pretending
Illusions
Superstitions
Emptiness
Irony

The fears they carried:
Blushing
Embarrassment
Dishonor
Being a coward
Dying
Showing a fear of dying
Showing fear

The dread of missteps they carried:
Carelessness
Stupidity
Shame
Terror
Blush of dishonor
Instinct to run or freeze or hide

The negatives of war they carried:
Grief
Despair
Resignation
Paralysis
Dealing with death

Bill Briscoe